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I Was

I was kind and I was caring, yet you refused to take notice. I was considerate and I was respectful, yet you refused to take notice. I was good and I was special, yet you refused to take notice. I was athletic and I was talented, yet you refused to take notice. I was smart and I was outgoing, yet you refused to take notice. I was popular and I was accepted, yet you refused to take notice. I was scared and I was alone, yet you refused to take notice. I was tired and I was sick, yet you refused to take notice. I was hiding in the shadow of the mold you created for me and I was overwhelmed, yet you refused to take notice. I was losing my grip and I was slowly falling, yet you refused to take notice. I was here and now I’m gone, maybe, just maybe, you’ll take notice. -Mysty Rayn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/2/2008 12:52:00 PM
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Date: 7/18/2008 4:33:00 AM
The shameful thing is that's when most take notice, after someone has left them. Your words speak with a poignancy, keep writing your ferelings as it does help. Michael
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