I Want You

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The Wonderous Flirty Eyes - GirlsAskGuys

her hips gyre near mine with carnal looks blinking... she struts off, teasing me Bobby May's Look At Me Contest 8/25/2020

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Date: 8/27/2020 1:20:00 PM

You definitely tease with this flirt line, Nette! Congratulations on your podium finish. Hugs // paul

Date: 8/27/2020 3:10:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 8/27/2020 2:06:00 AM

A definite teaser, Nette, my compliments on your win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Date: 8/26/2020 7:36:00 PM

I thought I wrote on this great verse. Great Monoku, Nettte, congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve

Date: 8/26/2020 3:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement Nette

Date: 8/26/2020 11:40:00 AM

Teasing? Aloha! Rico

Date: 8/26/2020 9:45:00 AM

... badly done ... :))) ... good one, Nette - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)