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I Want To Love You

I want to feel you like a petal feels the wind I want to touch you like dewdrops touch my skin I want to hold you like moon shadows hold a star I want to tickle you like the flutter of a butterfly tickles my heart from fields afar I want to lay my head upon your lap like a child lays his head upon the lap of a sterile mother in her fertile dream I want to miss you like an immigrant misses his home-land The land which deceived his opportunities yet embraced his early footsteps Poured his first tear in a stream I want to think of you,ardently I want to seek for you,secretly In the same way those paramour's enchanting eyes seek and wander for his flamboyant mistress I want to live dying to have you like a hero dies in battlefield dying to capture his daughter's smile knowing that the last glimpse of her is a worn out sanguined picture I want to find you in the same way my faith finds God Without seeing,without knowing With all doubts,questions and mysteries With all that I was,with all that I am and all I ever will be I want to love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/17/2014 9:01:00 AM
I would say this is unconditional love where trust and faith provide a sound basis. Lovely imagery, too. A top rating, as always. // paul
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Date: 11/17/2014 12:33:00 AM
Very touching.. DC
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Date: 11/16/2014 8:51:00 PM
What a wonderful love to have. Hope that you my dear have found such a love. Beautifully written. Loved it!! Hugs Edith
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Date: 11/15/2014 1:25:00 PM
i would have to agree with richard on that one charmaine very beautifully painted piece dear friend
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:15:00 AM
You have such an amazing loving heart my dear sweet friend! What a beautiful write! Loving hugs, dear one! XXXXX
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Date: 11/14/2014 6:51:00 PM
This is such a touching romantic piece. He is a very fortunate fellow to inspire such affection.
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Date: 11/14/2014 3:05:00 PM
Your poem fires the imagination to a very hot fiery red and then you gently reform it into a beautiful love song -- tempered and strong. The "sterile mother" and the "immigrant" brings incredible depth to the poem . . .
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Date: 11/14/2014 1:53:00 PM
Wow Charma what a peach..I love it....you captured the moment perfectly.... Hugs Tim
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Date: 11/14/2014 1:47:00 PM
Charmaine, Very beautiful and most moving. The imagery is captivating and exquisite. Extraordinarily well-done!! A "7" from me and a FAV. This one's a Keeper!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 11/14/2014 1:46:00 PM
Very nice analogies...I enjoyed it...Best wishes to you dear...
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Date: 11/14/2014 1:42:00 PM
Hi Charmaine, You always have the best sensual poems. Wonderful images here. I love the lines; "I want to live dying to have you" and "last glimpse of her is a worn out blooded picture." Very nice. Great poem. Keep up the great work. Take care. Earl
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Date: 11/14/2014 1:17:00 PM
Wow Charma such incredibly powerful romantic imagery full of longing- fabulous write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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