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I Want To Hit Pause

I want to hit pause Not because I fear the future But because this moment is so full and sweet These moments are rare And move away quickly They become lost in the Day to day rush of life I want to hit pause Not because I fear what is ahead of me But because I fear I won't remember this Feeling of love These are the moments that sustain us. I want to treasure them.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2016 10:15:00 PM

Patricia,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/2/2016 9:13:00 PM

You have just captured them in this beautiful write Patricia...always to cherish and remember...welcome to the soup...god bless...your friend...^WW^