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I Want To Have the Victory of Life Game

I was born in a small town seen many ups and down At the middle of the road of my life pain from the heart's grave I realize now, I don't find my sweet College life What I had left behind the way now muffled voices of my memory casts But Soul says to throw all bad things of the past drive the life vehicle smoothly ahead to reach another golden gate Destination is waiting eagerly time is passing fastly waits for none I want to have the victory of life game being a robust by maintaing trust without forgetting my memories of the past Sponsored by: nette onclaud Written by: bldevnath

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/11/2012 8:18:00 AM

hi bl.. thanks for entering.. kindly put your best age in the poem and check the spelling of " ahed" ( ahead).. thanks!...:) hugggs!

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 9:32:00 AM

Thanks......bl"

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 9:28:00 AM

Sorry, my friend, silly mistakes I do many times. Many many thanks for showing me the path. Loved it, my sweet friend. I have done after your touch. Thanks......b"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2012 6:52:00 AM

bl ! Thank you for sharing it,it is not always life bring what we want most.oxox love Anne-Lise

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 7:09:00 AM

Hi! my sweet friend. Thanks for your lovely comment on my write. bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2012 4:52:00 PM

a very positive energetic poem, BL. YOu should put your best age on it and enter it in the Age contest! by the way, just say fast(not fastly) I really liked this one from you!

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 7:08:00 AM

I try to feel anything with my own instinct given by my believed God. God is with in you, I am inspired. Loved it, my sweet friend. I have entered in the contest. Thanks.......bl

Jack Horne

Date: 1/10/2012 12:19:00 PM

Deep write, my friend - I hope you succeed in all you do

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 7:02:00 AM

Thanks, no word I want to speak here,my sweet friend, JACK HORNE......bl

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/10/2012 7:54:00 AM

ANd that you shall my poet friend... fine poetry written here... always Michael

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/10/2012 8:08:00 AM

Many thanks to you for reading my write and for early comment. Loved it very much. bl