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I Want To Be Yours

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I Want To Be Yours

I want to be....

Your rose without a single thorn,
Your rainbow without a summer storm,
Your oyster, which contains a pearl,
Yet nobody is perfect, and I'm just a girl,
I promise I will do my very best,
To love you better than all the rest.

I want to be....

One half of our unbroken heart,
Your new beginning for love to start,
Your laughter that never ends,
Your arrow that Cupid sends,
The key that unlocks your heart,
The one with whom you never part.

I want to be....

Your sunshine without a cloudy day,
Your moonlight there to light your way,
Your music to the lyrics of a song,
A love you've longed for, for so long,
Your inspiration I want to be,
For your words of divine poetry.





Written by: Kelly Deschler

The Sweetest Touches of Verse Contest

(Iambic Tetrameter)


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  1. Date: 11/30/2014 6:48:00 PM
    This is a gem of a write Kelly....Congrats on your win

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 12/4/2014 11:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for your nice comments, Joseph!
  1. Date: 11/30/2014 12:43:00 PM
    dropping back with my congrats kelly:-) Hugs Jan xx

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 12/4/2014 2:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Jan. Hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2014 7:49:00 AM
    Kelly this is such a sweet romantic dear! Congrats on a much deserved win!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 12/3/2014 2:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much for your kind words, Dr. Upma! I don't write a lot of romantic poetry. I should try to do more, because this poem was a joy to write!
  1. Date: 11/30/2014 1:37:00 AM
    KELLY. Congratulation, enjoy your win. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/14/2014 9:55:00 AM
    How lovely and romantic, Kelly! Your words are expressed with love and sincerity. Congratulations on your win. // paul

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 10/17/2014 6:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the nice comments and kind congrats. I appreciate them very much, Paul!
  1. Date: 10/13/2014 1:16:00 PM
    Beautiful thoughts, a very nice poem indeed! Congrats Kelly on your win and thank you so much for this poem.. love

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 10/17/2014 1:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're very welcome, Gautami. Thank you for your nice comments. I appreciate you placing me amongst so many talented poets in your contest! :)
  1. Date: 10/13/2014 12:48:00 PM
    So pure and charming. Congratulations.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 10/17/2014 1:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your nice comments, Maurice. I appreciate it!
  1. Date: 10/13/2014 12:29:00 PM
    so sweet and full of romance many congrats Kelly its a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xxx

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 10/17/2014 1:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your nice comments and kind congrats. I appreciate it very much, Jan! Hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/13/2014 11:56:00 AM
    Congrats on another win, Kelly

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 10/17/2014 1:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Dr. Ram!
  1. Date: 10/13/2014 10:23:00 AM
    I was hooked from line one...LOVE the way you introduce all three verses with 'I want to be'....Brilliant and elegant poem. Congratulations Kelly - Tim

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 10/17/2014 12:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your nice comments and kind congrats. It really meant so much to me, Tim!
  1. Date: 3/8/2014 4:18:00 PM
    Hi Kelly, this piece flows straight into the heart. So gently does your emotion flow forth in your words of Love. This is a song that the heart sings Kelly. This is Love in its simplistic form, the pure form. Each vision just flows so effortlessly into the next. This river of words leads into a sea of Love within each heart that reads the piece. This touches the very Soul Kelly. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 3/11/2014 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Mike, it is always easy to write about love when you truly feel it in your heart and deep within your soul. This poem was my first, first place win in a contest. So, this poem will always be a special one for me. Glad you enjoyed it, my friend! I hope you are having a great day! :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Kelly This is so sweet and full of romance. I can feel the emotion flowing from your heart onto the paper. Nice job Thanks for the fantastic comment on my Eyeful Of Emotions poem.

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:26:00 AM
    Congratulations Kelly on your well-deserved win. cheers!! so beautiful poem :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 9:16:00 AM
    I am so happy that your poem placed this well! First place is always a feat of skill. It is so nice to have people to rejoice with is it not? Congratulations on the superb win of your pretty and brilliant poem!

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 11:00:00 PM
    You did an amazing job with this... so lovely and musical...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 7:09:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win. Why am I not surprised? I've known you are a winner for some time... Love ya dearly.... Jake

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Hi Kelly, I like your epic style.. a lovely shade of dark. congrats~ SKAT

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 4:39:00 PM
    you crafted a very romantic poem here...congrats on your win with this lovely write!

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Touching and heart-felt poetry! Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Good morning Kelly, congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest... glad to share the #1 spot with you... xox~ Linda

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