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                              I WANT TO BE. WITH YOU

                               I WANT TO BE WITH YOU,
                                WHEN THE HEAT OF THE SUN,
                                IS NOT ENOUGH FOR YOUR HEART.

                                I WANT TO WIPE YOUR TEARS,
                                WHEN THE RAIN OF THE SKY,
                                 GOES ACROSS TO YOUR EYES.
                                  I WANT TO BE WITH YOU
                                   WHEN YOUR WORLD FALLS DOWN,
                                    AND YOU GET LOST IN THE WAY OF THE LOVE.

                                     I WANT TO BE WITH YOU.

                                                                                   TEODORO GUTIERREZ

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:07:00 PM
    TEODORO , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:10:00 AM
    Well done, Teo. Welcome to the Soup. Rick