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It may seem incredible that a person would stop taking medication because the doctor
prescribed a different-colored pill. It happens! An article in the October 13, 2014, issue of
The Atlantic states, "A pill's hue can affect how it's judged by patients, how it's marketed,
and even how well it works." The article also states that sometimes people do what Mom in
my poem does. The poem is not about my mother.

 

My mama loved her yellow pills; she'd taken them for thirty years. Her outlook wouldn't be the same without them. They assuaged her fears and made her smile, although hard times throughout the years had come her way. "I wouldn't be the same without my yellow pills," she'd always say. Last year we went for her exam. Her doctor said, "I'm giving you a different pill, a stronger one-- a better one! This one is blue." You'd think the doc had threatened her with fifty lashes. She replied, "I want my yellow pills!" I said, "By doctor's orders, we'll abide." As weeks passed by, I noticed Mom was not herself. She seemed so sad. Her explanation: "Well, I'm old. Sometimes old ladies just feel bad!" I soon would know the reason she was sad. One day I found her stash of bright blue pills. I saw them where she'd tossed them in the bathroom trash. I told her doctor, "Mom must have some yellow pills. She's fading fast. She will NOT take blue pills. She trashed them all." The doctor was aghast. Now Mom takes yellow pills again, and her depression's history. The folks who think pill color's not important should ask Mom and me. written for the Lewis Raynes That Colorful Drug contest May 31, 2016

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Date: 6/12/2016 10:21:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/12/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thanks so much, BL. Janice
Date: 6/10/2016 9:15:00 PM
I see this got a high placement from what Connie says. that's great news. it's a great poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/10/2016 9:14:00 PM
People are so silly!! I never let myself be influenced by colors that way. If you tell me it's the same thing and it's not, i will probably believe you and feel good. haha. Also, I love ice cream even if it is black. I remember my friends hating it even though it was licorice, just because it was black.
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Date: 6/5/2016 5:29:00 PM
Your poem deals with the human aspect of psychological dependency and the fact that color makes a huge difference. Very true Janice. Congratulations on your high placement! Very deserving ! #7 ; )
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/5/2016 8:18:00 PM
Connie, thank you so much for your comment! Janice
Date: 6/4/2016 3:12:00 AM
That is fantastic. Congratulations. I have prescribed a lot in my time and in more ways than one, the patient is (almost) always right.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/4/2016 7:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kai. Janice
Date: 6/2/2016 10:08:00 PM
I loved this write Janice, and the whole new perspective about addiction. congratulations on ur placement.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/4/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lewis; and thanks for sponsoring. Janice
Date: 6/1/2016 7:12:00 AM
So realistic, Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/1/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thanks, Balveen! Janice
Date: 5/31/2016 5:03:00 PM
Gosh Janice you wouldn't expect the colour of a pill to have such an effect on a person - fabulous write good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/1/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! I was amazed by the facts in that article. I like contests that prompt me to dig! Janice

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