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I Wanna Take You

I think I'll take off my top and crank up the stereo you won't wanna stop the spirit driving me to go all wild and crazy on life's winding road baby, don't be lazy get out of sleep mode light fingers through hair gentle caressing of skin shedding worry and care with no fear of sin I wanna take you for a ride let's fly down the fast lane quit trying to hide I'm only slightly insane why are you just standing there? get your ass in the car wipe off that silly stare my parent's house isn't that far!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/5/2016 8:27:00 AM
LOL.....I love it. Those that read this poem will know soon where their minds go first...Car or other....Great job!!!
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Date: 12/3/2016 9:34:00 AM
You are a clever, Christy - I know I'm not the only one who fell hook, line and sinker for your 'sexual' ploy. It was well executed to pull off your intentions, and I enjoyed the shift (car talk) so much. I am impressed and delighted with your poem. Maybe you should put it in the ZANY contest ... 7 ... CayCay
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Date: 12/1/2016 8:30:00 AM
Er ... my instinct is to say I'll be right over? Lot's of fun, starting with taking off the top. Flows readily, a naughty undercurrent, and it rhymes, too! Nice to read, thanks, Dave
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Date: 11/30/2016 7:32:00 PM
That is totally not fair, not fair at all...ha. You got me...now I understand the silly stare. And it's a convertible, damn...I'm laughing here and probably blushing a little bit too. That was great Christy. I really liked this.
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