I Wanna

I wanna be a peace For everyone. But! I wanna give it to someone. I wanna be an Eraser For everyone. But! I wanna Erase Something! to someone. I wanna be a dream For everyone. But! I Wanna show it to someone. I wanna speak out For everyone. But! I wanna talk to someone.

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Skat A

Date: 5/10/2015 10:53:00 AM

Mohammad :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love

Mohammad Hafiz
Date: 5/26/2015 11:03:00 AM

thank you

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2015 5:15:00 PM

MOHAMMAD, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Mohammad Hafiz
Date: 4/30/2015 6:38:00 AM

thank you so much SKAT...i am very happy to see your such type of comment :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2015 3:58:00 PM

This is deep, Mohammad, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Mohammad Hafiz
Date: 4/30/2015 6:40:00 AM

thank you so much.