Get Your Premium Membership

I Waited Too Long

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Listen to poem:
I made a mistake with my mother when the doctor told me she was dying I should have brought her home to die with me I live with that weep at night because it haunts my soul I could have it was her wish to be honest I was just so afraid . . . then when I wanted to it was too late if it happens don't wait till its too late her old cat w a i t e d on her bed for days and weeks t h e n he came to me ___________________________ June 27, 2016 Poetry/Tetractys/Senyru/I Waited Too Long Copyright Protected, ID 16-84-627-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym For the contest, Your Biggest Mistake sponsor, Laura Loo Sixth Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/8/2016 8:56:00 AM
Broken Wings, another new form I've never tried! This is so sad and yet you express your words with such ease and grace. I hope you are healing as each day passes lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Date: 7/7/2016 10:51:00 PM
Love this beautiful write, Broken, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2016 9:01:00 PM
Awe.. I'm so glad her kitty found her love in you...
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2016 11:32:00 AM
Regret and remorse - two strong emotions in a poem so beautifully composed! And your senryu provided the icing on the cake. All the best for the contest, Broken Wings.~karam~
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs