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You'll soon be here It's quiet now, all have gone Last light softens what was too bright before the surf kicks a ball as if to say come play with water teasing my toes I wait here for you one bird curiously inspects my wheels tries to tear a worm away The sky draws purple shawls slowly waving in the evening wind I still wait for you In last fringes of light I need to save myself From floods rising fast in my eyes I give the ball back to the ocean *** July 20, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 7/28/2017 3:05:00 PM
Nicely done, Darren, your strength and imagery is beautiful. ~*
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Date: 7/22/2017 12:33:00 PM
well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..
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Date: 7/21/2017 7:04:00 PM
Nice, as usual, Darren. A touch of pathos! I enjoyed the read. Ram
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Darren White
Date: 7/22/2017 1:38:00 AM
Ram, thank you so very much :)
Date: 7/21/2017 11:25:00 AM
You are such a gifted writer my dear. I define art as drawing an emotional response, which you do so gracefully with your pen. Hats off to you xomo
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Darren White
Date: 7/22/2017 1:37:00 AM
Thank you mo :) And yes, it is.
Date: 7/21/2017 8:24:00 AM
Reads very sad to me Darren. I hope you are not sad.
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Darren White
Date: 7/21/2017 9:35:00 AM
Don't worry Daniel, it really is first and foremost a poem
Date: 7/21/2017 6:30:00 AM
I especially love your last four lines Darren, says it all. Very profound as always....Maria
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Darren White
Date: 7/21/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Maria!
Date: 7/21/2017 12:19:00 AM
This is why I MUST create words! Ballishous!
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Darren White
Date: 7/21/2017 9:32:00 AM
LOL, I love your new words :)
Date: 7/20/2017 1:59:00 PM
Wave to wave I'm just enjoying your time///waiting along side with you// to be blown in every direction// along with my tide
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Darren White
Date: 7/20/2017 2:09:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate you so much :)

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