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I Wait

Neon lights flicker in the back alley two, gin induced, jovial souls stagger and sing along with the band playing inside the Blue Bird Café Outside leaning on the painted brick wall I wait my heart beats fast, my palms sweat too and I wait wait for her and her almond eyes her diamond smile I wait for her presence for her company, to fill my lonely nights to ease my lonely mind to erase memories of loves lost to dance in my arms to comfort me to be one with me I wait and I hope hope she is the one A misty rain begins to fall and then I see her sashaying my way bright yellow dress black stiletto pumps a gleam in her eye lighting up my night I take her arm my heart skips a beat we head inside and I smile hoping and praying I'll wait no more
09/07/2015

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Date: 9/22/2015 7:06:00 PM
Tim, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2015 12:52:00 AM
Congrats on ur brilliant winning write Tim!
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Date: 9/20/2015 3:54:00 PM
Tim, I just stoped to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/20/2015 1:06:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2015 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs dear friend Eve
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Date: 9/9/2015 6:02:00 PM
Wonderful write, Tim, that is just like a woman to make you wait Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/8/2015 7:43:00 AM
I love the feeling of wanting and longing in your enchanting lines... I bet She s always with you through thought.. and in thought you ll always be one with those you love especially in moments of absence.. Love love this .Charma
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/8/2015 5:00:00 PM
The hard part is there seems to be more moments of absence than not. She is always in my thought.
Date: 9/8/2015 3:16:00 AM
What a lovey and fabulous write TIM, you have already experienced difficulties while waiting hope you wait no more as you said... Your is eloquence and excellence... Good luck.........A.M.
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Date: 9/8/2015 1:32:00 AM
Wow Tim another sweet romantic full of longing! A perfect entry, Gl in contest!
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Date: 9/8/2015 12:44:00 AM
This is as usual, beautifully romantic, however I thought at first it was for the pecan pie!!
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Date: 9/7/2015 8:54:00 PM
this is a wonderful entry for the "waiting" contest. full of longing and sweet images.
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Date: 9/7/2015 3:09:00 PM
ohhh, you need not wait anymore, tim... delicately affectionate piece.. huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/7/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Nette but I don't mind waiting for the right one
Date: 9/7/2015 1:27:00 PM
:) Lovely write, Tim. Very sweet indeed.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/7/2015 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Eileen
Date: 9/7/2015 1:07:00 PM
Nice way you captured the thoughts and feelings of the one who waits, Tim. Good luck!
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/7/2015 4:14:00 PM
Thanks Kim
Date: 9/7/2015 12:56:00 PM
Hope she's worth waiting for Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/7/2015 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Me too : )
Date: 9/7/2015 12:51:00 PM
Great love write. Very nicely done. this is certainly a 7, excellent.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/7/2015 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Michael.

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