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I Wait

I wait I feel my heart beat wildly and slowly look to the door I’m sure that you are there I can feel your presence I sense the way you touch me though your hand I can not see I close my eyes and I know that it is you as the scent of your cologne fills the room Quietly, I settle into the chair waiting to hear a whisper or a sigh Wanting to hear the sound of your voice Praying to look again into your deep blue eyes but you’re not here I know that nothing that I have is the same as it once was I understand that it never can be again, yet I wait Patiently I listen as if that moment is upon me Nothing, I turn, and still nothing I wait only to be disappointed but I know that you are here I feel you and whether it is real or imagined I hope I cling to the hope that someday I will see you standing before me again I wait and I will continue to wait

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/12/2009 12:24:00 PM
this is a beautiful write, it reminds me on my poem I'll wait for you, but waiting for the Lord to return wow imagine if he came and knocked on our door, oh how beautiful that will be, thanks for your feedback on my poem lost sheep, God bless from diane
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Date: 3/10/2009 6:21:00 AM
I know how you feel..this is a beautiful write and full of emotions. Thanks for commenting on my work also. Very encouraging. Continue to shine.
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Date: 3/9/2009 3:25:00 PM
Lolita, you touch on so many senses in this heartfelt poem - "touch" of hand, "scent" of cologne, "hearing" whispers and sighs. Truly awesome! And thanks for your kind words on "Trail of Tears." History is filled with many injustices that inspire me to write. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:10:00 PM
Very well written, I too, have waited and waited, I finally quit waiting, it's hard when you hold your breath waiting for someone, and all you do is end up turning blue. You write beautifully, thanks for the comments.....Aleera
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Date: 3/7/2009 8:10:00 AM
You have a great touch fo love poetry Lolita/Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog comments today
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Date: 3/6/2009 8:53:00 AM
Well done, you touch the readers heart with this one, and we wait along with you hoping for a happy ending. ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:37:00 AM
Sad but lovely write thanks for comment on Yellw Rose
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Date: 3/6/2009 4:47:00 AM
A powerful love you write of. I am wishing for you. Beautiful write of love and longing. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/6/2009 4:30:00 AM
Oh, the patience and the love that is demonstrated in this write is truly amazing and great. Many blessings to you my friend. Michael
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