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I hate being sick Hate it a lot I hate this cold This cold I have caught. When I cough My lungs feel they'll burst I hate being sick This is the worst. It's my day off And I want to play Not sit here coughing And shivering all day This cold is annoying I wish it would go I hate being sick I thought you should know. * I have bronchitus and am feeling sorry for myself

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Date: 2/11/2011 2:53:00 PM
Please feel better Francine, and thanks for the sweet comment but its not for a contest, its an example for my Tanka contest.. which by the way thank you for supporting...Michael
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:07:00 PM
I hope you feel better soon. This is a decent way to describe it all poetically.
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