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I Think of You and Then Set My Tears Free

My world is in the past and I see you there Now nothing has meaning I don’t have a care It’s all gone or been left astray I’m surprised when I can make it through the day I wouldn’t change our time together you know I’m proud I think of you and then I scream out loud I believe in everything and what we had I think of you and the loss and then I get mad You were my true love now you’re a memory to me I think of you and then set my tears free I break down a lot over the littlest thing I wish you were here to make my heart sing I can’t eat at all and I’ve lost weight I try to visualize what to do but I can’t see straight I wouldn’t change our time together you know I’m proud I think of you and then I scream out loud I believe in everything and what we had I think of you and the loss and then I get mad You were my true love now you’re a memory to me I think of you and then set my tears free The days seem longer I try to get lost in the mundane But it does no good when your souls in pain The essence of you haunts me when I’m alone I try to find comfort peace and closure when I visit your stone I wouldn’t change our time together you know I’m proud I think of you and then I scream out loud I believe in everything and what we had I think of you and the loss and then I get mad You were my true love now you’re a memory to me I think of you and then set my tears free It’s all over whelming I don’t know what to do So I pray to god and light a candle for you Ashes to ashes and dust to dust Your looking down from heaven waiting for me in this I trust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/23/2011 9:34:00 PM
Hi Kevin, such a touching verse on loss, one has to feel the pain when reading it which speaks of your ability to reach the reader's heart.
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Date: 8/24/2011 6:59:00 AM
Thanks Elizabeth. That is a great compliment if you can really feel the emotion and it has meaning to you. I am always after the readers heart.
Date: 8/23/2011 4:19:00 PM
I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Kevin. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2011 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Carol
Date: 8/23/2011 3:57:00 PM
Love your use of expression in this sad write Kevin. You manage to convey such deep emotion with this piece and I like your use of the repeating stanza. I'm glad that this is not the space your in right now! Best wishes to you Em :)
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Date: 8/23/2011 7:07:00 PM
Thanks Emma for your comments
Date: 8/22/2011 9:46:00 PM
Wonderful sad write me Mate Kevin, you know I'm in the same place...good luck on contest....with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/23/2011 6:45:00 AM
Hi Jack I just write my poems for everyone. I am really not in this place. I always write about love and loss. Which contest are you talking about? Does this poem meet a criteria of one of the contests? Let me know and I'll enter it. Thanks for your comments
Date: 8/22/2011 8:13:00 PM
if this is personal then I'll advice you take heart.sad though but well written.
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Date: 8/23/2011 6:47:00 AM
Thanks Wole for your comments. I am fine. I just write this way all the time. I you can read some of my other poems and you'll see. I always write about love and loss.

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