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I Think of You - Where You Bloom - 4

A transparent melody paints the walls in the coloured scent of fresh linen. The changing of sheets in the morning air can not erase our dance from evening last. Outside a late spring asleep too long with no blooms until June, awakens. Fully opened September flowers perfume late night conversations. Looking outside reveals only one set of footsteps in both directions. The days when I would watch you walk, lagging behind with a smile. The moss grows wild in the forest... trees surrounded by families of mushrooms. The word "family" so I... An I for an I and soon the whole world will be in love. How I long your hug, your body encompassing mine. God exists no greater proof... With a single tear I lay flowers where you bloom...and I i think of you. March 20 2015 Armand

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Date: 5/1/2015 5:34:00 PM
Fantastic! I usually am unimpressed with contradiction, but you use it well with your imagery. You have a brevity that speaks volumes.
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Date: 4/8/2015 1:51:00 PM
I love your poetry because you are so dang good at it...
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Date: 4/3/2015 10:35:00 PM
So many ways to describe this poem : passionate and romantic, heartfelt, yet sad and sentimental. All in all a beautiful tidal wave of emotions... Very nicely written, my friend!
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Date: 4/1/2015 1:22:00 PM
Beautiful, sad , impressive and shines a light into your soul. A7 but truly deserves a ten . Reminds me of losing my dad when I was 15... You stir the reader deeply with this gem...
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Date: 4/1/2015 12:29:00 PM
An excellent poem, Armand - Very impressed!! Some stunning poetic lines and verse - Superbly done!! A Seven!! Best regards! :-) John.
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Date: 3/29/2015 9:35:00 PM
very nice poem Maurice
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Date: 3/29/2015 3:28:00 PM
Explosive images of happiness abound Maurice. As I wrote in my previous comment, your heart is beautiful, James :)
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Date: 3/28/2015 8:12:00 AM
... I am really enjoying this adventure..
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Date: 3/25/2015 7:54:00 PM
an incredible insight into your inner core Maurice superb hugs 7
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Date: 3/25/2015 2:36:00 PM
A moving poem. I like the trees being surrounded by mushrooms brings to mind the word "family". I appreciate the eternal quality in you writing.
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Date: 3/25/2015 8:37:00 AM
Good morning Armand, I hope you are well.
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:52:00 AM
Sad and beautiful, at the same time.
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:55:00 AM
Armand, this one moved me more than usual. In fact, I think I am just going to move into my favs. It is good to have you back. May God bless you with what you need now.
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Date: 3/24/2015 1:38:00 AM
This poem touches the heart with its beauty and sadness at the loss. I love how you express love Armand! 7
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Date: 3/23/2015 7:19:00 PM
This leaves me imagining beauty,affection and love,yet the ending makes my heart feels sad,cuz its as if its describing,departance,or maybe the death or absence of a loved one..It stirred my heart..Outstanding poetry,glad we have you back.Prayers for your sweet daughter dear friend..She ll be ok
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Date: 3/23/2015 11:30:00 AM
Last installment I've read today, Armand. That single tear was my undoing...Another 7 and a fav on these 4. You are blessed! Hugs! Kim:)
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Date: 3/22/2015 3:52:00 AM
nice to see you again, armand.. you caress this page with your sensitive lines.. thanks for passing through.. huggs
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Date: 3/21/2015 10:00:00 PM
Nicely done -- your words danced in my heart! 7
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Date: 3/21/2015 7:39:00 AM
I so enjoyed this series, you are a gift to us Armand.
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Date: 3/21/2015 7:33:00 AM
I love these poems Maurice,. :)! I read it all through.. what a wonderful poet you are..! I am glad you are back here. Shall pray for you still..//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/21/2015 1:56:00 AM
Another beautiful and amazing write from you...I'm in awe of the emotion and imagery...to my faves also...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/20/2015 10:35:00 PM
OH my, Armand. Makes me sigh at the end. So poignant this is. Faves from me too. Glad to see you here again. (Well, to know you were here.) continued prayers for your daughter.
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Date: 3/20/2015 1:24:00 PM
simply breathtaking my friend - 7 and faves:-) Hugs jan xx
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