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I Think I Know Why the Ocean Flows

The view from our cruise ship Conjures far-flung images of amber hues A fusion of illusion and reality Where bending arc of the horizon Greets the magnificent ocean. The ocean flows, having done so Billion years plus so many more Churning, foaming, bouncing, dancing From Atlantic to Pacific, Arctic to Antarctic And every continent in between. It goes to war flaunting armored ships Designs exotic scenic beaches Goes boating, surfing, fishing Enjoys scuba diving in coral reefs. As our dining room turns heads to peek At the petite towns of the Mediterranean Dressed in olive and orange trees Moonlight's reflecting from the sea Dancing to twinkling lights from the hills. This beast and beauty held together by gravity Harbinger of love, romance, happiness Fills my gleeful heart with its own echo I think I know why the ocean flows. August 2, 2017 HM: Strand select V contest by Brian Strand Paced 2nd: A Poem I wrote and Sent Drifting Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 4/22/2020 1:06:00 PM
A lovely write Vijay.
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Date: 4/18/2020 9:15:00 AM
Masterful! So picturesque..brilliant poetry, Vijay.
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Date: 8/7/2018 5:20:00 PM
wow, this is such a clever picturing of ocean and shore!! I really like this one. I am discovering some real treasures back here from summer '17
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/7/2018 6:43:00 PM
You are always so kind like a dear friend!
Date: 10/13/2017 5:08:00 AM
Blessings and heart-felt congratulations on your win, Vijay - wonderful work and well-earned, my friend! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2017 5:55:00 AM
Many thanks Greg!
Date: 10/12/2017 8:23:00 AM
Well done Vijay. Congratulations.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Frances!
Date: 10/12/2017 7:55:00 AM
Great write and win Vijay...Congrats
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 10/11/2017 10:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay on your fine win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 6:33:00 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Date: 10/11/2017 8:54:00 PM
Vijay, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem. I love the title too!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 6:33:00 AM
Thank you BW!
Date: 9/12/2017 8:25:00 AM
Beautiful, enchanting imagery. Thank you for creating this splendid picture in our thoughts, Vijay!! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thank you again for your awesome feedback,Teddy!
Date: 8/9/2017 11:28:00 AM
Wow, I love this write, so flowing and beautiful. A fav
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2017 1:29:00 PM
So glad to receive your feedback Lewis--many thanks.
Date: 8/4/2017 7:29:00 AM
Wow, this is excellent! I am enjoying your poetry. Thanks for sharing :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thrilled to get your feedback. Love your work.

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