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I Swear I Want To Die

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Why don't you pull up a chair 

and stay here awhile?

It’s our second date. On our first date we talked until sun rise all I wanted to do was to keep looking at you, to keep looking at your lips, to keep looking at your eyes, listen to you attentively. I should tell you I was resentful of the morning light placed a dot on chapter one of you and me. This time we start our date at my favourite restaurant. You tell me you love it. We dine in the divine atmosphere of two strangers slowly becoming friends. Your laugh sends joy back to my past, through to my future, your laugh is my joyful present . Your smile hugs my body. I think you may be the one. Then I wonder if I spoke my thought out loud. Coincidentally you suddenly hold my hand with both of yours as you speak to me looking at me eye to eye. I swear I want to die, now, in this perfect moment, in this perfect us. I don’t remember leaving. I do leave but this time I don’t feel alone. This time I feel you with me. I start to laugh happy in this silly me. I paint you from memory on the retina of my eye. I fall asleep just to visit you in my dreams. 04~12~2014 Maurice Yvonne

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Date: 12/11/2014 2:54:00 AM
Isn't it funny how sometimes we want to die after the best moments of our lives, instead of the worst?... This was a beautiful expression of happiness. I could feel the emotion grow from beginning to end. Lovely work, my friend!
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:09:00 AM
Maurice, you captured the feelings of the first moment of meeting until the spirit still lingers in the memories of our ongoing life, a wonderful write. Blessings my friend eve 7
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Date: 12/5/2014 12:44:00 AM
Perfectly beautiful Maurice!Loved the memory from retina of eyes!
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Date: 12/4/2014 10:15:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful. I love this one!!
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:35:00 PM
Sweet is the story, sweet is the love, -- I felt the mojo flowing through the words. Outstanding good friend.
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Date: 12/4/2014 8:41:00 PM
:) Romantic and sweet! Gush of feelings...euphoria
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Date: 12/4/2014 8:09:00 PM
All this is so familiar and so real and what makes it so special is I feel myself remembering those exact feelings. Brilliant write Maurice. 7+fav.
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Date: 12/4/2014 4:59:00 PM
Wow Maurice this is awesome I've read it through 3 times now - can really relate to it - I remember when I met my ex - we met at a friends party and sat up chatting till 5am just like we'd known each other all our lives - was a magic moment... superb write my friend fave and 7
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Date: 12/4/2014 3:11:00 PM
'I paint you from memory on the retina of my eye.' I liked that. Very clever.
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Date: 12/4/2014 3:08:00 PM
aww cool story :)
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