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I Swear

For you, Gran- I love you!

I swear..
I saw you come in last night,
You breezed, with ease through the midnight sky.
You were quick & beautiful
But you caught my eye.

I swear..
I heard you come in last night,
You whispered in my ear.
You tried to be quiet, quick,
But I knew, I heard you here.

I swear..
I felt you come in last night,
Wrap your arms around my waist.
You stood over me & comforted me
After another day that went unfaced.

I swear..
I felt you close last night,
Although we’re stars and moons apart.
Ever since that night you left us,
I always feel you in my heart.

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  1. Date: 6/10/2010 1:36:00 AM
    awesome tribute Rachel :) WN

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 9:23:00 PM
    This is so sweet, I am sure she would be proud of this- More Smiles

  1. Date: 4/14/2010 9:39:00 AM
    Touchy in a very sentimental, nice one enjoyed

  1. Date: 4/14/2010 6:59:00 AM
    beautifully done tribute

  1. Date: 4/14/2010 6:24:00 AM
    Rachel, great write in tribute to your grandmother..I can feel her love for you and your love for her...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 4/14/2010 6:05:00 AM
    very sweet poem--enjoyed

  1. Date: 4/13/2010 9:32:00 PM
    A fine tribute