I Surrender

Deep in my soul Shines a light I shine a light for you You breathed in me A brand new breath I shine so bright for you Oh how you love me How you love me so Jesus, this I give to you My heart for you to know You gave your life Up on that cross So I may be set free For here I kneel At your feet A light for you to see Oh how you love me How you love me so Jesus, this give to you My heart for you to know I shine a light I shine for you Deep within my soul Jesus, you are My everything My everything, my whole Oh how you love me How you love me so Jesus, this I give to you My heart for you to know

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2014 7:38:00 PM

Jayme, I'm a little late:(. However, this is a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 11/20/2014 9:37:00 AM

A divinely creation.I enjoyed reading.Welcome with love. -Safa

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2014 12:43:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jayme - I choose your first very well written lyric poem - Beautiful ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Schneiter

Date: 11/7/2014 6:00:00 PM

Jayme: The straightforward style of this poem gives it an endearing charm. I enjoyed every line of it. Congratulations on an exceptional composition.

Jayme Damm
Date: 11/7/2014 6:46:00 PM

Thank you, sir, for your very kind words!