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I Still Feel the Storm

I feel so alone with you far away I feel weak from inside but I do pray I missed you and I missed our first kiss Do you remember , When I've felt that my heart is going out of my chest I miss our night and I miss your warm It's sunny right here but I still feel the storm Since you've gone and all what I feel is pain When your gonna heal my scars with your rain I need you here to threw my wounds away I need you here so my soul can stay What should I do if your not here with me ? Without you I'm blind when I'm supposed to see I wish you come back home soon And I wish you bring with you my moon

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White Sage

Date: 2/14/2016 5:01:00 AM

a deep write Dalia, excellent use of words, you have a great pen, with many such potentials

Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/14/2016 5:24:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment and happy valentine's day for you , hugs / / :)

Mark Anthony Cotterman

Date: 1/13/2016 4:06:00 PM

very nice style and strong content. excellent write!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/14/2016 10:34:00 AM

Thank you very much , I appreciate it...

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/31/2015 7:57:00 PM

Losing and/or missing friends and love is just too painful. I sometimes think that the pain of this is the worst thing in all the world. There is just so much pain in this crazy life, but It sure motivates us to write these wonderful exprwssions.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/31/2015 10:19:00 PM

Ur definitely right my friend , it is the most painful thing ever, I appreciate your great feedback and ur delightful words. Happy new year and hugs / / :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/29/2015 9:12:00 AM

Very nicely written my friend. "I wish you come back home soon And I wish you bring with you my moon" The greatest pain , is when they never bring the moon back.. A7

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/29/2015 9:20:00 AM

Ur definitely right my friend, an I thank you for your sweet comment I do appreciate it and I feel pleasure that you liked it...Happy new year and hugs / / :) dalia

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/27/2015 6:40:00 PM

Your Beloved must share the purpose of love in his bare soul, love will break souls apart when they refuse to join the heat of their desire. "I need you here so my soul can stay..." breathtaking intensity and need Dalia...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/27/2015 8:11:00 PM

Very well said , it is passion and desire what keeps two souls connected to the life time and beyond , I'm so glad u liked it and I thank you for your very heartfelt and beautiful , lovely comment ..hugs / / :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/27/2015 12:15:00 PM

Well written with a nice cadence and fine rhyming! Best wishes, Keith

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/27/2015 12:35:00 PM

Thank you very much my friend for ur lovely comment, I appreciate it...hugs / / :)

Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts

Date: 12/27/2015 9:57:00 AM

I can totally relate to this. But through various storms in my life. Not just love but through emotional and physical storms. Plus the mental storms caused by stress and medications. When your gonna heal my scares with your rain * I think you mean scars here.* Then this line could use something to say warm. Like feeling so warm , / or your warmth I'm not trying to be critical as I really enjoyed reading this.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/27/2015 10:05:00 AM

Yes my dear I've wrote it too quickly and didn't notice that tiny mistake , though thank you for ur feedback and ur great comment , I appreciate when people correct my mistakes cause that makes me try to do my best every time to be even better...hugs / / :D