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I Speak For the Dead

Note: This poem is the twin poem for "She Speaks for the Dead." This one is in the mockingbird's perspective. I perch upon the locked gate, awaiting the deepest hour of night. My abode is among the shadows of the gravestones, still and weathered. There I hear a faint sound of bare feet along the grass, And I see a Woman near the cypress tree. She is frail and clad in robes— She looks at peace with the world, and with Death. But the Woman stops as if she is waiting for something, listening for something in the stillness. Could it be my own voice that She is calmly awaiting? Some trills of Truth to break Their silence? I feel a change in the air as the shadows deepen on the headstones, the monuments, the cypresses, the gate. I begin to speak for Them and that Woman with the gleaming yet respite eyes I begin to speak for Her. My channeled chirps are variations of lives once lived, and my growing audience is vastly keen.

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Date: 3/23/2024 7:03:00 AM
Laura, you haven't lost the haunting quality and mild eeriness that gives me the chills. The description of a woman in robes adds so much. There is a message from the dead to us if we are smart enough to take it in. Your work has a dream-like quality where logic gets discarded and anything can happen. I realize that is what I like so much about your writing. It goes beyond the rational day to day happenings and allows me to contemplate a part of life we normally don't experience in this way.
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Date: 3/22/2024 1:11:00 PM
Hey you.. I like how your poem explores themes of mortality and the afterlife, as well as the idea of communication between the living and the dead. The speaker's speculation about whether the Woman is waiting for their voice to break the silence with "trills of Truth" adds depth to the narrative, suggesting a search for understanding and connection beyond the physical realm.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/23/2024 7:07:00 AM
Ahh thank you Silent One! It’s good to see you. Thank you so much for your thoughts on this one. ~Laura
Date: 3/22/2024 11:23:00 AM
Dear Laura, What a hauntingly beautiful portrayal of the mockingbird's perspective in communicating with the departed. Your imagery of the graveyard and the presence of the Woman adds depth and mystery to the scene. I loved how your poem captures the essence of the connection between the living and the deceased, as the mockingbird becomes a conduit for their stories. Your words are filled with reverence and intrigue, pondering life's and death's mysteries. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/22/2024 5:43:00 AM
Mysterious and intriguing. I wrote a 7 part epic featuring a raven delivering a series of prophetic messages to mankind. You always have an interesting poetic pov Laura
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