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I Sipped Chocolate In Your Kiss

(30/10/2011) It was my first kiss Heated by your warm soft lips Sweets from your lips’ tips Intertwined desires I sipped chocolate of your lips Our blood pumped in whiz Dinda Minardi For Michael J. Falotico contest "Kiss Like a Fruit"

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Matthew Anish

Date: 12/26/2011 6:48:00 PM

Did you win the contest? I like the phrase "choclate of your lips. Peace & love Matthew Anish

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/16/2011 9:12:00 AM

A guaranteed way to get more, a nice goal to have when it's the right person. Enjoyed the taste! :)

Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2011 10:00:00 AM

Very nice Senryu on kiss.I am a male from India.I think you are a lady/girl.Isn't it?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/7/2011 6:18:00 AM

A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 11/6/2011 6:28:00 AM

Lovely romantic piece. Many congrats on all your wins too, Dinda : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2011 5:03:00 AM

Congrats Dinda on a fantastic win with a chocolate delight so tasty luv...yum

Kash Poet

Date: 11/5/2011 6:51:00 AM

Very nice Dinda.Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/4/2011 8:23:00 PM

well, who says chocolate cannot be a fruit? Yummy! And congrats on your win.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/4/2011 2:59:00 PM

Congrats my dear sweet poet friend.... Hey luv we need to collab again... Let me know... love Michael

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/3/2011 8:50:00 AM

sounds yummy. i bet he'll love this :)

James Fraser

Date: 11/1/2011 2:44:00 PM

This has just got to be a winner Dinda, nice one :)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/30/2011 5:10:00 PM

Sounds scrumptious sweetie, can't get enough of this sweet rhyme. All the best in the contest!

M.I.A .

Date: 10/30/2011 4:15:00 PM

soo sweet Dinda. thanks for stopping by and good luck on the contest!

Steven Henderson

Date: 10/30/2011 7:35:00 AM

Your words take me back to my youth. Thanks for sharing Dinda! Steve