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I Shudder

Winter I feel nothing your icy kiss leaves me numb your raw coat of shifting winds leaves me frigid isolated in the cold I shudder.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2010 11:39:00 PM

oooh, I like this! Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/18/2010 11:19:00 AM

Wow Shirley, deep write, I love your work.. WNN

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2010 9:16:00 PM

wow, deep write... I like how I can visualize this and then I can also see this in a diferent perspective, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/15/2010 6:41:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shirley. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/14/2010 8:14:00 PM

Very vivid and descriptive.. now there is a free verse contest posted.. u should enter this one .. contests are one way to get your poetry read and if u win.. read even more.. go to the contest page and scroll down till u see FREE VERSE contest by Catie Lindsey.. hit enter contest and your list of poems comes up.. click on Shudder and click enter.. easy.. good luck if u do.. check out the rest of the contests too.. with luv..