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I Should Have Bought Violets

I gave my true love a red rose For Valentine’s Day, this I chose I was aiming to please But the bloom made her sneeze Now I can’t tell the rose from her nose
For the: Roses Are Red, Violets Are Blue - A Valentine Challenge In One Of Five Ways Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 12/31/2022 9:56:00 AM
Haha, that's sad... Very well penned. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/16/2022 2:10:00 AM
Funny and melodic. I like this a lot Chris. Belated congrats!
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Date: 3/25/2022 9:07:00 AM
Very cute! :)Paulette
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Date: 3/12/2022 9:04:00 PM
This is so cute and funny at the same time Chris. I loved it! I have been so busy lately making house repairs I just haven’t had much time for Poetry and I have really missed it. Poetry always cheers me. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/19/2022 7:31:00 AM
Hahaha. This is great. Congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Date: 2/17/2022 5:02:00 PM
Great limerick! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/14/2022 7:53:00 PM
Chris so funny. Congratulations on your win in Andera’s contest. Happy Valentin's Day :) Blessings my friend
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Date: 2/14/2022 11:07:00 AM
A fun write, Chris. congrats. Terry
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Date: 2/14/2022 5:25:00 AM
Hilarious, Chris:) congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 2/13/2022 8:14:00 PM
That’s Awesome! :) Congrats!!! M.
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Date: 2/13/2022 6:13:00 PM
the beat and the rhyme Perfecto, Chris. AND funny. Congrats
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Date: 2/12/2022 1:32:00 PM
I enjoyed this fun poem, Chris. I hope all is well :)
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Date: 2/7/2022 4:28:00 PM
Hello Chris, I couldn't help to laugh reading your poem. Peace& Love, Darlene
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Date: 2/7/2022 1:58:00 PM
ha! very funny, chris! good luck in the contest...
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Date: 2/7/2022 1:20:00 PM
Hope your lady forgives you :) Very clever, especially the last line, Chris~
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