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I Set a Fire

Colorful days pouring like snow, winter not but so cold inside Picking them in baskets of memories, I set a hell fire of love Let my days burn into ashes, spreading heat to loving dear ones.

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Jcb Brul

Date: 5/25/2020 8:35:00 PM

There is loveliness in every word ..in every line..I feel fire burning amidst the coldest night! Splendid! I must try this form!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/25/2020 11:55:00 PM

Thank you Burl for your delightful comment..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/24/2020 10:34:00 PM

Loving embers making a warm glow of comfort and sincerity, keeping the cold out. How lovely ...

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/25/2020 12:04:00 AM

Thank you Shirley..Your comment comments can be a poem scattered..Takecare..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/24/2020 11:20:00 AM

I'm with Andrea there on that phrase, 'a hell fire of love.' Love it! :) gw

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/25/2020 12:01:00 AM

Thank you Gershon..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2020 8:27:00 PM

So interesting that phrase a hell fire of love! It really does the picture justice!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/24/2020 12:02:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..Takecare..

Eve Roper

Date: 5/23/2020 12:40:00 AM

Jenish, the title tells it all. Sigh, Love.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/23/2020 9:19:00 AM

Thank you Eve..