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I See You I See Me

I see you, I see me. I see the us we use to be. Your music, my writing. We saw the future in each others eyes. A band for you, a novel for me. My soul mate so I thought. But what it was, was magic. A true friendship I would see when I looked in your eyes from that moment on. A kiss so tender only a friend could provide. Ravishing energy beamed from you when you played. A glow like never seen before as I put into words I see you I see me. I see the us we've become today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 7/25/2008 1:25:00 PM
This was really beautiful. I see u at poetry soup and I'm glad your here. Keep writing congrats.
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Date: 7/22/2008 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Caroline. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2008 11:41:00 AM
Very beautiful poem - As love grows it gains strength and beauty - congrats on the feature
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Date: 7/21/2008 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations Caroline on being featured this week with "I See You I See Me." Vince
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Date: 7/20/2008 6:49:00 PM
What an uplifting piece. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/20/2008 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations Caroline on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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