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I See You I See Me

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I See You I See Me

I see you, I see me.
I see the us we use to be.
Your music, my writing.
We saw the future in each others eyes.
A band for you, a novel for me.
My soul mate so I thought.
But what it was, was magic.
A true friendship I would see
when I looked in your eyes
from that moment on.
A kiss so tender only a friend could provide.
Ravishing energy beamed from you when you played.
A glow like never seen before as I put into words
I see you I see me.
I see the us we've become today.

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  1. Date: 7/25/2008 1:25:00 PM
    This was really beautiful. I see u at poetry soup and I'm glad your here. Keep writing congrats.

  1. Date: 7/22/2008 5:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Caroline. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/21/2008 11:41:00 AM
    Very beautiful poem - As love grows it gains strength and beauty - congrats on the feature

  1. Date: 7/21/2008 8:32:00 AM
    Congratulations Caroline on being featured this week with "I See You I See Me." Vince

  1. Date: 7/20/2008 6:49:00 PM
    What an uplifting piece. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 7/20/2008 5:55:00 PM
    Congratulations Caroline on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar