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I See You

Chasing eyes, against the tide Raise your hands, really high Feel the breeze, energy increases On the mirror of your soul I see, you looking Away, why is that? I’m right here Don’t you see? Embracing lies, against my mind Run in those lands, just fly Bleed your feet, where the soul lives Is where I wanna go Look at me Once, now There’s no next time Can’t you see? Can’t you believe? Are you afraid? Just look at me I promise you peace Look at my mirror You’ll see part of you Our souls are playing I see it, that’s why I sing this.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/7/2014 11:46:00 AM
Antony, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/28/2014 9:47:00 AM
beautifully penned vision
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Antony Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2014 10:02:00 PM
Thank you!

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