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I See Undoubtable Beauty

Why do women doubt What seems so easy for us to see We might have arms like branches Yet women are the roots of the tree All of natures forces Within their soul's does reside Love for the generations On their strength us children have relied So I will shout it from the rooftops I have known mother, sister and wife They are the very best part of my being The givers and keepers of life Opinions both strong and gentle Yet each one of them is plagued by doubt I guess that's why I'm left to wonder What in the world are those thoughts all about? So I reach to them with my very essence Willing to absorb a small bit of their pain In hopes that they can see more clearly And love themselves without any restrain I know they think mostly of others In the end that's who they truly are It's that combination of doubt strength and beauty That makes each one of them more lovely by far In the end all I can do is be thankful Enjoy each one as they're wonderously made There resides in each one a special sparkle A true beauty that never can fade To me they are comprised of music A blessing through all of my days Women and all of their mysteries gifted to us from Ancient of Days!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/6/2016 7:30:00 PM
such a wonderful tribute to all the women...i would say they are lucky ! And I am lucky to read this poem and post my comments...7/7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2016 7:35:00 PM
Thanks Red! Hugs Rick.
Date: 11/10/2015 9:28:00 AM
a sweet tribute to women..thank you friend..stay blessed...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/23/2016 6:18:00 PM
Sorry I missed this thoughtful comment till now. Also thanks for the blessing.
Date: 10/11/2015 5:13:00 PM
An excellent tribute to the women who played and still play an important part in our lives, Richard. #7 // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Paul.:0)
Date: 10/11/2015 6:17:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to women everywhere. Thank you.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/11/2015 9:40:00 AM
Thanks and a big hug Monterey!
Date: 10/8/2015 12:28:00 AM
Beautiful. Such an affirming write, Rick!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/8/2015 7:50:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 10/7/2015 6:46:00 PM
Richard they are recognized for how special and unique they are to you. I am sure they feel so blessed to be part of your love for them. Beautiful write honoring your sis, mom, and wife.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/7/2015 6:56:00 PM
Thanks Michael, I have been very fortunate to have wonderful women in my life including friends.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/7/2015 6:47:00 PM
And all other special woman.
Date: 10/7/2015 2:51:00 PM
This is a cheerful descriptive poem filled with respect, that carries a happy beat, praising women and their virtues. Very well written. Emile.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/7/2015 5:53:00 PM
Thanks Emile.
Date: 10/7/2015 11:31:00 AM
As a woman, mother, wife and friend of everyone we as women thank you for seeing us as we are Know you are loved. Know also that it is a terrific poem. Am very proud of you Love Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/7/2015 12:15:00 PM
You my favourite one are greatly loved. You are the foundation upon which my heart had been formed.

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