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I See the Light

I see the light Shining so damn bright In your eyes Is where my happiness lies Bringing me smiles From far away miles I wish you weren’t so far It feels further than earth to mars But it’s nothing we can’t handle Because our love is the everlasting flame of a candle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/14/2016 11:57:00 AM
Kaitlyn Avery, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:49:00 AM
This is so very beautifully romantic, Kaityln, it touched my heart! I rate it a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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