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I See the Earth Move

watching a sunset on the beach at the ocean touching the skyline one quarter, one half bright, blazing red-orange clouds our star slowly sinks I am observing mighty Mother Earth spinning my mind blows gently... *For the Sunset contest sonsored by Nayda Ivette Negron

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Hansteven Selfa

Date: 12/27/2015 2:06:00 AM

Beautiful :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/26/2015 7:05:00 PM

A picturesque trio of haiku! Congrats on your win, Tim! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2015 10:09:00 AM

Tim, I really love the last one there. GREAT KU!! Leaving for Iowa this afternoon. Much to do and trying to catch up here first. I'll miss it. Have a fun thanksgiving.

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 4:12:00 AM

WOW, you blew my mind Tim, CONGRATS! On your sweet SunSet win. LOVE SKAT

Eve Roper

Date: 11/23/2015 8:54:00 PM

Excellent write! Congratulations on your win!

Lin Lane

Date: 11/23/2015 11:50:00 AM

Nicely written, Tim. Congrats.

James Inman

Date: 11/23/2015 10:57:00 AM

Deep thoughts, Tim. Nice poem.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/23/2015 10:23:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Tim!

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/23/2015 9:54:00 AM

The title alone, drew me in !!! I want to sigh !!! :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/23/2015 9:44:00 AM

Congratulations Tim.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/18/2015 2:38:00 AM

Tim, this string of Haiku is extraordinarily exquisite! Mine pales in comparison to this beautiful work of art! This is certainly a big time winner in my books - BRAVO and a 7, my friend! Pandita