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I See Diamonds In Your Eyes

Sixty years ago today we were happily united as husband and wife, To begin that long anticipated, yet uncharted journey of wedded life! Though you've been adorned with dazzling diamonds along the way, They'll ne'er compare to the sparkle of diamonds in your eyes that day! Diamonds gleamed in your eyes when we pledged our eternal love! There's no doubt that our life together was ordained by heaven above! How your eyes sparkled like diamonds when cuddling our babes at birth! Of your love for them and least deserving me, there is no dearth! Though our eyes have grown dim and we both wear crowns of gray, I still see shining diamonds when I gaze into your eyes each passing day! My beloved one, you are as beautiful now as the day we were wed. To borrow a phrase, "Our journey has just begun! The best is yet ahead!" Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 1 in Gail Doyle's "A Diamond In Your Eyes" Contest October 2012

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Date: 11/14/2012 2:11:00 PM
This is wonderful, I can relate my Mary is just such a gift, God willing we will also be blessed with many years. Thanks for sharing this testament of your love.
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Date: 10/19/2012 1:02:00 PM
Your marriage is an inspiration to us all, beautiful and touching write! Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 10/12/2012 3:49:00 AM
Well done Robert - Congrats! Its a perfect match - 60 yrs. Such an achievement. :D
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:33:00 PM
Bob H., this is a wonderful entry. , congratulations, with your awesome poem in Gail's contest..... xox~pd
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Date: 10/9/2012 2:32:00 PM
Wonderful poem, congrats on your win. I truly hope that the best is yet ahead. Take care Lee
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Date: 10/9/2012 2:32:00 PM
So nice to be still in love! Congrad's on your win just wonderful Light & Love
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Date: 10/9/2012 12:29:00 PM
A great write and dedication to a long and happy marriage.
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Date: 10/9/2012 11:16:00 AM
Great love!! soooooo sweet!!! fantastic write!!you deserved to win 1st place in Gail's contest. Big big Congratulations Friend Robert!! let's call for a celebration!!!!(^_^) hugs!
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Date: 10/9/2012 10:27:00 AM
CONGRATS BOB ON A MAGNIFICENT WRITE AND WORTHY WELL DESERVED FIRST PLACE WIN LUV .. ALWAYS ENJOY YOUR SPECIAL BRAND OF CREATIVITY .. WELL PEYTON LOOKED PRETTY GOOD AGAINST BRADY .. IF ONLY THEY HAD THAT STEAM THE FIRST HALF LUV THEY WOULD HAVE WON .. KEEP THE FAITH ,,
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Diamonds Contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2012 1:17:00 AM
Beautiful! :D Always, Laura
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Date: 10/6/2012 4:58:00 AM
Very well written and a pleasure to read as always. Good job Bob.
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Date: 10/1/2012 11:28:00 PM
Bob H., your poem is a wonderful and brilliant entry.. I know Gail, is going to love it.. the best of luck..always~ pd
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Date: 10/1/2012 8:01:00 PM
Robert; this is so romantic. I just love it. Thank you so much for sharing. Lucy
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Date: 10/1/2012 4:29:00 PM
awww! i hope your wife loved getting this poem as much as the rest of us enjoyed reading it. so very touching and beautiful. happy anniversary!
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Date: 10/1/2012 4:19:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Great romantic dedication to your lovely wife..Enjoyed reading....Sara
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Date: 10/1/2012 11:46:00 AM
ohh, this is a moving piece, bob... your images are really refreshing and full of love's devotion for your wife... may you be blessed with many more seasons!.. winning huggs!.;)
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Date: 10/1/2012 10:24:00 AM
So sweet and loving Robert and we hope many more anniversaries to come, Congratulations too, that's six life sentences in jail xx
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Date: 10/1/2012 4:46:00 AM
Fantastic ... after so many years and equally romantic Bob. Wonderful poem - Both thumbs up for you in the contest!! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2012 11:33:00 PM
This is so beautiful and touching Robert. Your wife is a lucky lady. All the very best for the contest.
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Date: 9/30/2012 8:09:00 PM
What a lovely poem and tribute to your wife, Robert! Congratulations on 60 years of marriage! That is quite a milestone. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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