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I See Beyond the Stars

I see beyond the stars at night.
A peaceful place of delight,
Perhaps I’ll see my mother there.
Fly with wings without a care,
With old friends I can unite.
Filled with love they never fight,
In a place, pure and white.
People I know are unaware,
I see beyond the stars.
Don’t know why I have this sight,
See this glitter, oh so bright.
It glows and drifts everywhere,
Beautiful clouds of magical air,
How omniscient… the celestial light,
I see beyond the stars.

Entry for “I See Beyond......”  Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Paula Swanson

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  1. Date: 12/27/2011 8:19:00 PM
    Great way to do the contest, Grey and GREAT win. Congratulations to you.

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 7:58:00 PM
    Congrats on your fine placement in the contest...You did well with this difficult least it is for me. BG

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 1:40:00 PM
    Very expressive work..Enjoyed congrats on your win...Sara

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 5:38:00 AM
    You wrote a "heavenly" rondeau, Greg. It is beautiful. Congrats on this 3rd place win. A very competitive contest. Great job! Happy New Year, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 5:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "I See Beyond" contest Greg. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 10:41:00 PM
    I hope to someday be able to see beyond the stars also Greg. Congratulations

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 9:17:00 PM
    Congrats. Greg on your well deserved win with this lovely poem about stars, it rings of pure light and love, hugs to you, vie

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 4:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on a big win with your thoughtful poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 4:11:00 PM
    Greg congrats on your win, great..David

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 7:29:00 AM
    The best to you in the contest Greg. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 9:21:00 PM
    Greg, I enjoyed your special poem, I am sure your mother is watching over you probably reading your lovely poem and is smiling with the angels, love and light, vie

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 5:47:00 PM
    Greg, you have decently descriptive wording and appropriate rhyming throughout this entry. Paula should appreciate this one for her contest.