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I Say Hi With a Smile

I say hi with a smile All men are selfish, as we only want the most beautiful girl. As time goes on this story will tell. As I see so many of these ladies that are to good to be true, how can a guy like me get one of them to be my wife, my lover, my best friend. I heard her laugh inside saying no way guy you will never be my type. I say hi with my nicest smile, she didn't even notice as she knew she was in denial. I even stood before her to sing. I yelled please just pick me I already bought your diamond ring. I begged her to just give me one date. She only looked at me with even more hate. I said in a desperate tone please give me your phone number so I can always start out your day saying hi with a smile. She finally gave in after I said just give me a try I'll give you what you want all in a smile.

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Date: 9/3/2011 10:47:00 AM
Eric, this poem does not qualify for the contest you entered it in , which is "one English Quintain" . No other form is accepted for this contest, if you would please remove it I would love it if you would write an English Quintain to submit.
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