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I Saw You

i saw you, god, the day the earth dropped. your grip slipped, & at once all movement stopped. i stood, rivetted, peering out from the stomach of the sun- so many things you could've done, & yet despite the hold you had, away it flew; so far- so sad.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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