I Saw Santa Claus

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24th December 2023

In England it is almost twelve o'clock I just saw Santa Claus in his red smock He left parcels galore Outside of my front door Asked him in, but he said his lips were sore.

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 2/4/2024 4:12:00 AM

Uniquely expressed lovely poem here.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/24/2024 5:12:00 PM

Many thanks Yolanda… Beryl

Susan Manley

Date: 2/3/2024 6:23:00 PM

No doubt to many mistletoe miss deeds. That jolly man and his cookies and milk needs. Love it. Very cute.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/24/2024 5:11:00 PM

Thank you Susan… Beryl

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 12/30/2023 3:43:00 AM

adorable write

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/30/2023 6:51:00 AM

Thank you very much Yolanda… Belle

David Fisher

Date: 12/28/2023 9:01:00 AM

Lol! A limerick in it's true form. Better luck next year.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/28/2023 11:11:00 AM

Let’s hope so David, thank you and best wishes for a very Happy New Year… Belle

Silent One

Date: 12/25/2023 3:29:00 AM

Great limerick Beryl.. were his lips sore because he was kissing too many people under the mistletoe?

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/25/2023 6:40:00 AM

I guess so Silent One :) lucky lips Santa… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/24/2023 6:43:00 PM

Amazingly funny! My sincerest thanks for your lovely Christmas Eve Limerick. This time of year, may you and your loved ones receive joy and affection. I wish you and yours a wonderful Holidays.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/25/2023 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Sotto, Wishing you love, joy and a very Merry Christmas… Belle