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I Saw My Friend Crying

Yester night, I saw my friend crying Tears trickling down like she’s dying And the agony’s rhythm comes singing As she in angst deeply sinking. I ask her, “What’s the matter?” Words weren’t enough for her to uttered For her comfort- words I fluttered Then I contemplate “her day was shattered”. I watched the glistening tears rolling by I’d offered my shoulders for her to cry Letting go the deepest sigh How I wish- pain, said goodbye She is a friend I used to know I commune with her in joy and sorrow In darkness and in glow Today or beyond tomorrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/22/2017 10:12:00 AM
The closest friend perhaps ... nice images ...
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 1/24/2017 1:53:00 AM
yes she was. like a sister since then sir. thank you for stopping by. God speed. :)
Date: 1/22/2017 6:50:00 AM
Rather ambiguous...And intriguing! My best regards, Stephany. P.s Are you of Spanish origin by any chance?
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 1/24/2017 1:59:00 AM
oh thank you John, yes i do have a minute share of a spanish blood but i am a filipina.. :)

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