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I Saw It In the Mirror a Loop Poem

The prompt for our group was "I saw it the mirror, I saw it in my face" If eyes are windows to the soul I saw mine in the mirror Mirrors don’t lie they are simply a reflection Reflections bear witness to our personal reality Reality is our truth desired or not it is there There is no running from what hides in our soul Souls are seen in the mirror and I saw mine in my face Face what’s harbored in my soul…. this is my journey Journey if you dare it is a centripetal force AgMoore©03/28/11 This is a loop poem, since there is no info here is a link to show how to do it (it's really easy = ) )) http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/looppoetry.html

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Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/4/2011 11:44:00 PM

Excellent write nifty form....with love...old Jack

Don Johnson

Date: 7/29/2011 1:23:00 AM

Yes the mirrors often speak to me, sometimes pictures come to see, My grand daughter standing there, in the mirror, blondish hair... Yes she came to see, beautiful g/child to be, she is here born, with us, our family care, Laura is a plus:) as she had promised me.

Amanda Moore
Date: 7/31/2011 9:38:00 PM

Don that is lovely.....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2011 9:53:00 AM

It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Amanda. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol

Amanda Moore
Date: 7/26/2011 12:07:00 PM

Gosh Carol thanks so much!

Anula Aboobacker

Date: 7/25/2011 6:00:00 PM

interesting style and a nice read :)

Amanda Moore
Date: 7/25/2011 10:32:00 PM

thank you again Anula you're very sweet!