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I Saw Her But She Did Not Me

“I saw her but she not see me” I saw Her but she not Me -- I was gone- Hope she could Hear me -- it's fine -- When I left She was hurt -- couldn't bear to go Could not help I went -- down below -- The days grew long -- but she still held on- Having hope -- I might be There- She one day saw -- A way to see me -- But seen -- other people wouldn't care -- She went to Her room -- door closed with a Click For She missed me so -- and wanted to die She Loudly Screamed -- It ended quick -- She fell on the floor -- Soul departing -- Alongside me -- hand in hand -- We walked together -- as once before -- We arrive then -- the screams surround us -- We know that we -- have arrived Home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/15/2015 12:15:00 PM
Hi Nathaniel, this is such an excellent piece that makes me look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/12/2015 12:04:00 PM
Nathaniel, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/11/2015 2:35:00 PM
Nathaniel, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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