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I Saw God But Now What

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Written: April 13, 2024 for Unseeking Seeker Contest Rumi Quote: "I searched for God and found only myself. I searched for myself and found only God"
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Have you seen God in your parent's sacrificial love? In the abyss of their dreams, shoved from above.    I discern God as the pinnacle of love and affection. I spot God in a state of ecstatic bliss, laden with elation. Behold the world, mirrored in a dewdrop's gleam. Has the sun drawn a rainbow in a summer stream? I grasp God in a tree whose hollow mouth is prest. I meet grace amid nature's compassionate breast. Behold an array of hues within a stream flow. What if a summer whim is enthused by full moon glow? I perceive God in a tree that gazes at Him all day. I view God in a tree lifting its leafy arms to pray. Have you ever felt drawn into a genuine embrace? As a ray in gloom, it fills your sank heart with grace. Have you seen an eagle flying or a sobbing dove? Then you saw God draw a scene in a painting of love. Have you felt as if love soothed your mind and soul? With surety, God's touch graced your tender whole. I feel God in each breath I embrace of His air. I perceive God in a roost of robins in her hair. Have you noticed that love clings to your nude skin? Where hope prevails, and faith reveals love within, I spot God in a loop on a string, filled with sacred love. Auric delight, crimson blossoms from above, I worship God with untamed devotion, born of delight. Superb proof and exquisite hues of genuine sight, I perceive God in this existence; all are valuable, dear. Endowment to love and be loved is always clear. Have you seen God in a meager morsel of void soul? Devoured by a starved hound—spirit, core, and mole. To discern God as a lush garden in Elixir abode. A riveting crimson glow draws all swirling lode. A sight too divine for mortal eyes to define. Yet there's a vision beyond mere spot-shine. Men can't discern God due to His ethereal nature. Until we have eternal forms at our disposal later, Viewing God must be set, not left idle, as a vow. Zeal embrace, a celestial spite that might glow. A fiery sky, God's canvas divine, before the sun's rise. Seek God as a hummingbird sips from nature. Yes, I affirm, I have seen God But He appeared and then disappeared This knowing that transcends mind, left me awed But until what’s imbibed is assimilated, by fears I’m seared

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Date: 4/18/2024 8:00:00 AM
Oh lovely. I've seen him in different ways. Ways that seemed surreal, and that's why he's God. "A sight too divine for mortal eyes to define. Yet there's a vision beyond mere spot-shine." Love this. Nice one Sotto.
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Date: 4/14/2024 7:31:00 AM
God can be discerned in nature's splendor, and in the planets, stars, and galaxies in the very vast universe, Well written Sotto
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Date: 4/14/2024 7:09:00 AM
Your poem's contemplative tone and reflective imagery invite readers to embark on their own spiritual journey of discovery, encouraging us to seek and recognize God's presence in the world around us. It reminds us that the divine is not confined to grand gestures or lofty ideals but can be found in the simplest of moments and the most ordinary of experiences.
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Date: 4/13/2024 5:37:00 PM
Absolutely captivating, dear Sotto! You've beautifully given examples of where one sees God, many of which I identify with. Your take on this contest is unique with delightful rhymes and images. I loved everything about this poem!! I especially liked these lines: I perceive God in a tree that gazes at Him all day. I view God in a tree lifting its leafy arms to pray. This poem should do well in the contest. Wishing you a wonderful evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 4/13/2024 4:54:00 PM
I truly like this one. God is there in all of nature if we only take time to see or open our eyes so we can see. I enjoyed reading your examples of how you had seen God. I can tell you will never be without a vision of God the Creator. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 4/13/2024 2:15:00 PM
A powerful depiction, my friend. Your Rumi quote sets a perfect introduction to your theme. Words of divinity resonate throughout, Lasaad.--I feel God in each breath I embrace of His air. I perceive God in a roost of robins in her hair--God is everywhere--as you so meaningfully convey.
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:37:00 PM
Brilliant! How beautiful, the little and meaningful things in life and all that which is around us that reminds us of the creator, the highest, the almighty that designed our life and all that around youv described with impeccable rhymes in the form of captivating couplets! I especially love the opening in this, so clever and so heartfelt! So beautiful how youv depicted what youv gathered from the line of enquiry! I think this will do very well for the seamless flow and descriptive nature of it. Pleasure reading thisb best wishes for the contest
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