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I Saw a Praying Mantis

I saw a praying mantis as I went about my day The brightest green, the coolest form and I just had to say “Please tell me of your prayer” He answered in his mantis style “I pray my friends are happy and they wear the nicest smile” “I pray for those now hurting, filled with sadness in their heart I pray for lonely people who have not a place to start” “I pray for all the homeless who are living on the street I pray they find some shelter and some food that they can eat” “I pray for anybody who is in some need of prayer” I listened to him carefully, so glad that he did share Then thanked him for his answer for I now know this is true, it seems that in my mind I’m praying for the same things too

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Date: 11/2/2021 11:30:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Date: 11/2/2021 8:05:00 PM
I never thought to ask a praying mantis about his prayer. So glad you did! A beautiful prayer :)
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Date: 10/27/2021 4:54:00 PM
Chris, WoW! Such a unique way to express your deepest sense of caring. Your personification of the Mantis, outstanding~"It seems that in my mind I'm praying for the same thing too"...priceless! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/24/2021 12:06:00 PM
So incredibly beautiful. I too pray for the same things. You're still writing such beautiful poetry:) I hope that you are well.
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Date: 10/23/2021 9:04:00 AM
I will see a praying mantis in a totally different way now. Prayers as per the mantis, gave it a sense of sweet innocence, but his prayers weigh heavily, as they do to you. Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 10/14/2021 8:56:00 AM
A lovely way to share a prayerful heart! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 10/13/2021 5:09:00 AM
Brilliant, just brilliant, Chris:-) This is a keeper! Faved.
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Date: 10/9/2021 4:54:00 AM
What a wonderful poem Chris and congratulations on your well derserved POTD. Fav for me. Emilia : )
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Date: 10/8/2021 9:48:00 PM
An inspiring and beautifully prayerful poem, Chris. Congratulations for your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Simply splendid! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/8/2021 5:59:00 PM
Chris, I love this poem! A well deserved choice for POTD! Congrats! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 10/8/2021 4:31:00 PM
Back with congratulations Connie on this beautiful tribute to your husband Michael. I'm happy for you that it was chosen as POTD. Tom
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Date: 10/8/2021 3:49:00 PM
I am returning to congratulate you on POTD Chris. I am so pleased to see this wonderful poem honored with POTD. Blessings. xxoo
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Date: 10/8/2021 1:07:00 PM
Great Poem. I really like the metaphor between prayers and a praying mantis. Especially about the homeless as I have a soft spot for them. Amen, and thanks for sharing.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Justin
Date: 10/8/2021 1:06:00 PM
I find it remarkable that you and this "Praying Mantis" are sharing the same thoughts. :) That makes three of us. This is such a beautiful prayer. Your words lift my heart. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Brandy. I am happy you stopped by
Date: 10/8/2021 11:31:00 AM
I like the intimacy of this one: Just you and the mantis, with your reader(s) peeking in. Congrats on POTD, Chris! Happy weekend! :) gw
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thanks my friend. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 10/8/2021 11:15:00 AM
What a wonderful rhyme! With a very beautiful theme! Great Work! Congratulations!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much
Date: 10/8/2021 9:23:00 AM
A sweet story. I always enjoyed finding a praying mantis when I was a youngster. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thanks so very much
Date: 10/8/2021 9:02:00 AM
A lovely story, Congrats on POTD
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 9:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Joseph
Date: 10/8/2021 8:50:00 AM
Hearty congrats on your potd with this beautiful write... When I was in my native place, my son spotted a praying mantis and showed it to me.... God bless... ~ Ani
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Anitha
Date: 10/8/2021 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful story/write. I love this. We can learn from your wise praying mantis. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 9:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula
Date: 10/8/2021 8:35:00 AM
Chris, absolutely beautiful and congratulations on your deserving POEM OF THE DAY ~peace and tranquility _Constance
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 9:10:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 10/8/2021 8:13:00 AM
how odd I commented on this earlier but my comment is gone, many congrats on POTD Chris, hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 8:24:00 AM
That is odd. Thanks so much Jan.
Date: 10/8/2021 7:34:00 AM
Wonderful! Congratulations on poem of the day Chris, it’s well deserved… Belle
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much
Date: 10/8/2021 7:19:00 AM
I love this poem Chris, it is a perfect prayer and so worthy of its POTD honors! enjoy your day !!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike
Date: 10/8/2021 7:06:00 AM
I love your poem, Chris, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2021 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Eve
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