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I Saw

Quietly within a shadow Not recalling when darkness came the night swallowed me somehow the wind whispered my name alone, below the starless sky I raised my eyes to see and there in total blackness saw the soul inside of me folded as a gilded book my life as it has been daring me there to look the deeds I've done therein Though I'd known it all before in a shadow put away now there upon the slate my score was the tally I saw that day

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Date: 9/7/2016 9:24:00 PM
This is splendid, Richard! A very good lesson in this poem. I enjoyed it immensely:)
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