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I Sat Beneath a Veteran Oak

I sat beneath a Veteran-oak, In awe of His strength— Here was a solid spirit! Sympathy you get from Willow, But stiff upper-lip from old soldiers, With forged bark — His limbs flexed, cut, rippled against the wind… No chinks in this warrior-wood… “Divide and Conquer!” Then I thought of my Father— A cook at the end of the war—The Big One! You know the One I mean, as if there are small ones— When the commanders were through eating He was instructed to toss the leftovers From the belch of plates— Trashcans were in the alley, The steel that seems intrinsic to battles In one form or another— The hungry German children Would sneak pass the guards And line-up; My father would sneak pass his superiors And his honor To dispense carefully wrapped scraps… Well, soon the line was out into the street As my father was compelled to seek food From wherever he could steal, beg or barter To procure—This brought attention—the cat-out-of-the-bag, And all hell down on my father, As the captain screamed: Gus, these are the enemy (the children in the alley), What in God’s Name are you doing? He was forced to stop—no Court Marshal though… I looked up again at the old oak, Through the snarled branches Deep into the staunch soldier, Where I spied a nest In a small, compact fork— Having a canopy of extra leaves For shade and shelter from the wind— I smiled—hum… His bark reddened, but like my father, no apology from this weathered soldier…

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Date: 5/23/2018 1:01:00 PM
This is the best story I have read this week (and I read a lot). I think it will stay with me. Thank you,Joe
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/23/2018 1:38:00 PM
Hi Geoffrey; You Made My Day!! Bless you my friend!!
Date: 10/6/2017 5:45:00 PM
A lovely poem, Joe!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/13/2018 1:32:00 PM
Hi James; thank you my friend!
Date: 6/13/2017 5:29:00 PM
How beautiful and touching this poem is Joe. It caused my eyes too well with tears. Your compassionate father raised such a loving son! This beautiful poem is a fave for me. :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/13/2017 5:32:00 PM
I had to come back to read this again and fave it: )
Date: 11/16/2016 7:00:00 AM
Epic story within your poetry. Significant and honorable analogy Joe.
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Date: 11/13/2016 11:35:00 AM
Truly great free verse my friend. A7 and a fav...
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Date: 10/25/2016 10:00:00 AM
We are all in this world together. There is no enemy in the eye of compassion. Very powerful writing, Joe. We should all learn the life lesson your father learned. Elaine
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/26/2016 8:10:00 AM
Old school. When once leaving a thrift shop in their parking lot, I remember holding the passenger-side car door open for my wife to get in--the young man next to us, forced to remain in his vehicle to my surprise smiled approvingly--"Old School" commenting.
Date: 10/25/2016 2:14:00 AM
Joe, well I see where your heart comes from. The apple doesn't fall far from the tree, and what a magnificent tree your father must be! What a wonderful way to remember the past and to honor the future generation with this wonderful true tale. I loved it! : ) 7
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/26/2016 8:15:00 AM
Your comment really make me smile, Connie; my father would be pleased though his bark would redden a bit, feeling not deserving of praise for kindness that should be second nature for all of us. Blessings my friend!

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