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I Sat

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I Sat

I sat down in the stillness
the light shining through
my head felt the earth shake
just across the room

I heard the star screaming
wishing for dear life
the beauty now masked with bruises
eyes masked with blood lines

I sat down in the darkness
the sun warmed my heart
my limbs have gone limp
just as in the start

I smelt the dear from the star
wanting to be free
the lovely perfume shattered
eyeing eternity

I stood up against my father
the hatred overcame
my hand held the knife of freedom
just there beneath his frame

I cried beneath the star
my mother she be bright
but when it came to father
she needed me for the fight

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  1. Date: 3/25/2010 11:34:00 AM
    I am so happy to see your poem amongst the ones I am reading today Faire. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration and hope for a better tomorrow. Love, Carol