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I Sang a Song That Went All Wrong Free Cee

THAT SONG WENT WRONG We danced all night as you listened to my serenade You heard the music romance made While we two-stepped in your living room Until that room filled with my tears became a tomb I sang to you about the magic that could be I crooned a tune about the mystic music made by you and me We harmonized with notes so sweet Until two part harmony met with defeat My song contained lyrics of sheer adoration So we sang and danced until your love’s cessation When our music was silenced and your love as well And no longer will my overture swell My song was stilled by sorrow and tears While I played a melody only a lover hears Now there’s no more harmonious song And we no longer dance all night long © 2011.…Phreepoetree ~free cee!~

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Date: 12/24/2011 7:30:00 PM
Ha Ha Reminds me of: "What would you do if I sang out of tune: would you turn round and walk out on me?" "Lend me an ear, and I'll sing to you dear, I'll try not to sing out of key." You must have sang out of key, Fella. (I can't remember the singers name, and he was one of my favorites.)
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Date: 12/24/2011 9:08:00 AM
It's always sad when a relationship ends. This is a beautiful poem, Jeffry. I love the way you used musical imagery to describe the scenes. God Bless. Kim
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