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I Sail This Ship Alone

As the last opalescent glow of sunset fades away I sail this ship alone towards a crimson horizon over a starlit sea to the soft lapping of waves which lullaby my destiny I sail this ship alone far from the coral sand far from the pebbled beach far from my sun-kissed land Tonight there is no moon but there's a sparkle in the sky a starry night so still filled with beacons of bright light Tomorrow births a new dawn a song within a dream meadows of yellow buttercups and fields of evergreen Tomorrow I'll be greeted by a pink-winged butterfly a host of daffodils, and golden dandelions a rose within a smile Tomorrow I stroll along a new shore feel fresh salt spray on my cheek dance bare-foot in the wind as Spring whispers on the breeze.

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Justin Bordner

Date: 8/23/2014 2:20:00 AM

Your heart charms the scene of a new dawn delivered from the hope of night sea Charma, very beautiful...J.A.B.

James Fraser

Date: 8/19/2014 6:05:00 PM

In school many years ago, we would sketch an image on a single page. As one flicked the pages, we could see we made a home made movie. What incredible joy it would be to do exactly the same with your poems Charmaine. Just imagine what you would view, something spectacular and breathtaking. Next time you read this one for example, close your eyes, and vision your words, dream deep, and I guarantee, you'll touch what you've written about. Now that's POETRY ;) James xx :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/19/2014 2:36:00 PM

You can always tell a great poem by the way it paints a picture for the reader. Well done!

Jeremy Martin

Date: 8/15/2014 3:42:00 AM

I wish I would be greeted with a host of daffodils. AH well. You're poetry is a bouquet enough for me. Nice to see you again. Still writing sparkling and fragrant stuff, I see. ~Jeremy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2014 9:16:00 PM

I love the beautiful bright feeling, Charma... You made the feeling, of alone worthwhile.... Allways~ LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/14/2014 6:54:00 PM

Always the romantic, I can feel how much you love! Light & Love

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/14/2014 4:36:00 PM

you've created a beautiful world. john

Deborah Kelley

Date: 8/12/2014 11:14:00 PM

Very nice! Congratulations! I love the line, "a song within a dream".

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/12/2014 8:08:00 PM

Congratulations on being selected! This is quite beautiful! Best of luck and creativity in the future. Best Matthew Anish

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/12/2014 3:01:00 PM

Grats on being the Poem of the Day :) woohoo :)

Leslie Philibert

Date: 8/12/2014 8:24:00 AM

A fine job. Readers might enjoy my work too, now on this site and others on the internet, as well as magazines in England and the US

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/12/2014 7:57:00 AM

This is a wonderful poem and it being POD is justice for the magnificent talent and heart that it represents! Congrats on receiving this honor....

Tim Smith

Date: 8/12/2014 7:54:00 AM

Congrats Charma on this beautiful piece being featured as POTD...hugs

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/12/2014 5:21:00 AM

Now....What do you think the odd are of it making Poem of the Week!?! I say, pretty darn good! <>wiNk<>huds lite N'luv

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/12/2014 5:18:00 AM

*somehow, I knew this would make poem of the day!~ GO CHARM~ the Main Poetess today!~ yAy~!

Mark Trichet

Date: 8/12/2014 4:25:00 AM

Loved it Charmaine, well done

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/12/2014 2:46:00 AM

:) Sweet and dreamy....Is that the poem or the poetess...BOTH, my sweet. You are BOTH. Such a fabulous write. Congrats on being here...Hugs

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/12/2014 1:16:00 AM

Very nic Charmaine.. Congrats on this being honored as the poem of the day. Verlena

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/11/2014 3:08:00 PM

So many vivid images in your poem, sweet friend. I'm so glad you felt better after a new day dawned. Loneliness is a burden that impedes many of us as we try to live happy lives. Thank you for your friendship, dear! Love you, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2014 12:33:00 PM

my, this is so beautiful, and yes, there is always a fresh tomorrow, charms!... love it!.. hugggs

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/11/2014 11:05:00 AM

WOW, just WOW. You definitely are NOT Alone. THis poem and YOU are on my Favorites! & a 7Rate MASTERPIECE!

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/11/2014 8:04:00 AM

A beautiful tomorrow! A great description riding on the smoothness of your thoughts, well done :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/11/2014 7:19:00 AM

Charmaine; This so beautiful and peaceful and very relaxing to read. I wish I was there too. Have a great day... Lucilla

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/11/2014 3:30:00 AM

what a wonderful world you paint. with today fading out and tomorrow on its way. beautiful, thank you.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/11/2014 3:25:00 AM

Excellent. lovely and well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs