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I Rock

They all see me, as just a rock Just lying on the sand A simple shape of elements Though complexed inside I am I was made before they were A million years or more And I'll remain long after They stop coming to this shore The sea has round my edges I've grown smoother after time And boys and men, both through me As I skip upon the brine Perhaps one day, someone might see And in their heart will grant A smooth round rock, just like me A place beneath their plant

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Date: 8/24/2014 9:01:00 AM
Excellent personification - awesome imagery - love it! Pandita
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 8/24/2014 9:13:00 PM
Thank you Pandita, I often feel like that rock
Date: 8/11/2014 7:11:00 AM
Great Jerry ! That reminds me of my old golden times when I too used to collect n talk to rocks! 16 yrs of collections n my granny visited, termed it as bad omen n threw all out of the house! I miss them, had many colours n textures !
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Date: 8/11/2014 1:53:00 AM
U really rock Jerry wid this lovely write! GBU !
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 8/11/2014 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Dr Upma, I collect rocks from all over the world, I sometimes think "If they could talk?"
Date: 8/10/2014 5:59:00 PM
You got me singing the old Simon & Garfunkel song...I am a rock... wonderful
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 8/11/2014 6:45:00 AM
I made you sing---Ah---That can't be good.......lol just kidding, Thanks Tim
Date: 8/10/2014 5:10:00 PM
Ohh, I like it. You can be beneath my plant any day, rock. Cute write, Jerry :)
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 8/11/2014 6:47:00 AM
Which Plant, I hope it's not the one your cat frequents .....lol Thank you Toquyen.

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