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I've never faced death, but I remember... The way my father was when he came home, the many times my mother cried alone. And the anger that haunted him at night, taunting a soldier looking for a fight. I remember a man drunk on rage and the abuse suffered at a young age. I've never seen war, but I remember... Nightmares fueling drunken slurs and screams from atrocities committed in dreams. The sad plight of a man hitting his boy, letting his temper strip his life of joy. I remember every battle he fought, played out amidst the pain each beating brought. I've never felt loved, but I remember... Feelings garnered from the lives of others where dads loved their children and their mothers. Labeled a burden, all of my dreams died, branded useless, no matter how I tried. I remember cursing my day of birth, conceived in love, yet deemed of little worth. I try to forget, but I remember...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/14/2018 2:53:00 PM
Wow. Amazingly powerful poem. Awesome, Emile
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:15:00 PM
Thanks Line, I welcome your input and appreciate your time my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/2/2015 10:31:00 PM
Superb write Emile that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
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Date: 8/3/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 8/1/2015 11:57:00 PM
Emile, congratulations. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 8/3/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your kind support. Emile.
Date: 7/17/2015 9:57:00 PM
wow, Emile. this is really heartbreaking what happened to you. I take it this is a true story. It reveals so much of your life and you have not been made bitter from it. Instead you are a wonderful human being.
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Date: 7/18/2015 9:40:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, your concern is touching, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 7/17/2015 4:06:00 PM
solid exposition of wrongful kind of dominance which we can change.. well done, emile..huggs
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Date: 7/18/2015 9:43:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your visit and words of support. Emile.
Date: 7/17/2015 2:11:00 PM
a simply heartbreaking story Emile I am so sorry you had to suffer such abuse - as part of my training I worked with children who had suffered similar experiences and the haunting look in their eyes will be with me forever:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/18/2015 9:40:00 AM
Thanks Jan, your concern is touching, as always, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 7/17/2015 11:25:00 AM
Oh my goodness, while this is such a brilliant piece, I do hope this is not your story! It is heartbreaking as no one should have to suffer such abuse! But Alas! too many are walking in these shoes. Excellent piece, dear Emile, that exposes the horror of an abusive life. It deserves a 7! Pandita
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Date: 7/17/2015 12:41:00 PM
Thanks Pandita, we all have our crosses to bare, this was mine. Emile.

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