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I remember, While scolding me , the anger in your eyes,, And somewhere deep inside your heart the unheard cries....!! I remember, The smiles and happiness on your face,, For my smallest of achievements in this lives race...!! I remember, The pain you got,when I fell sick,, And still you looked as calm and cool as any himalayan peak..!! I remember, The dreams and aspirations you had for me,, I'll try my best to become what you wanted me to be..!! I remember, All th love and care that you spread,, And a kind of honest and respectfull life you led..!! Dad, You and only you are the reason for my existance,, And you will remain my ultimate source of guidance..!! Dad, I promise I''ll let you down never,, And Dad, I love you forever and ever........!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/21/2016 10:43:00 AM
Hi, Nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 12/24/2015 9:22:00 AM
Mohammed, hope to see you post again. Merry X-Mass & Happy New Year... SKAT
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Date: 5/4/2015 5:06:00 PM
Such a great Poem, Mohammed. It's very nice to see some Dad poems here. They are just as important to a child as a mother. Welcome! ~Jan
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Mohammed Hussain
Date: 5/5/2015 1:52:00 AM
thanks janet.. very true...
Date: 5/4/2015 3:24:00 PM
A heartfelt poem, Mohammed, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Mohammed Hussain
Date: 5/5/2015 1:52:00 AM
thanks
Date: 5/4/2015 2:51:00 PM
Mohammed, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Mohammed Hussain
Date: 5/5/2015 1:50:00 AM
i have started writing poems aonly a few months back,, and i am learning to write better and better,,, thanks alot for your appreciation ,, it means alot to me...

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